Feedback On Our Opening

In lesson we all watched each others films and had to feedback to each group what we thought
there film was like. We had to comment on what rate the production followed codes and conventions, the planning, what level of imagination they used, technical aspects and how could it be improved. With the feedback our group got overall they thought the rate in terms of us following codes and conventions of romantic comedy was average with others saying it was good. The evidence that the audience saw, they thought that the planning of the production was a level 2, with 1 being excellent and 5 being poor. They said that from the evidence they saw it showed some imagination, this was quite good as the other options were no imagination, little imagination and high imagination & creative flair. They next had to comment on the technical aspects of the piece. They had to mark each technical aspect with 1 being excellent and 5 being poor. They first had to comment on the shot composition, overall the score was 3, but with one person saying it was a 4. The next one was mise-en-scene, out of the 5 feedback sheets 3 groups said it was a 3, but 2 groups said it was a 2. Editing got three groups saying 3, one group saying 2 and another group saying 1. Sound and music got two groups saying 2, two groups saying 3 and one group saying 4. Finally Use of titles got two groups saying 1, two groups saying 3 and one group saying 2. The comments we got of improving our work was mainly that the change in music did not go right and could of picked a better second song and made a smoother transition between each song. There were other comments such as better shots could of been used, more romance and less things in film.